My name is Jovan Garcia and this is my life. I am 11 years old my mom’s name is Sofia and my Dad’s name is Jose I have three sisters, the oldest is Brenda, Second is Juliet, and the last but not least is Sofia Isabel. My dad was born in Mexico in the part of Jalisco in a city caled Teocaltiche and my mom was born in califorina in a city caled venterua .Now let’s talk about me my favorite things . I like the colors red and green . My favorite hobbies are dirt biking, collecting comics, model cars and Legos my favorite MARVEL HEROS ARE THONTHONTON wolverine iron man and the dear devil . I play sports socrer and base ball . My base ball team is the reds and my frend Justin is on my team . I go to Saticoy School and have my friend name Justin my teacher is Mr. Wolff and Mrs. Gibe the techers that gide the class room . My favorite subjects are Math, Art, . My gools are go to school study good and doing my best in life . when i grow up i want to be a artist or a acter or model or this or that oh whell there is so meny things to do in life . And thats my life .
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My name is Jovan Garcia and this is my life. I am 11 years old my mom’s name is Sofia and my Dad’s name is Jose I have three sisters, the oldest is Brenda, Second is Juliet, and the last but not least is Sofia Isabel. My dad was born in Mexico in the part of Jalisco in a city caled Teocaltiche and my mom was born in califorina in a city caled venterua .Now let’s talk about me my favorite things . I like the colors red and green . My favorite hobbies are dirt biking, collecting comics, model cars and Legos my favorite MARVEL HEROS ARE THONTHONTON wolverine iron man and the dear devil . I play sports socrer and base ball . My base ball team is the reds and my frend Justin is on my team . I go to Saticoy School and have my friend name Justin my teacher is Mr. Wolff and Mrs. Gibe the techers that gide the class room . My favorite subjects are Math, Art, . My gools are go to school study good and doing my best in life . when i grow up i want to be a artist or a acter or model or this or that oh whell there is so meny things to do in life . And thats my life .
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I enjoyed your personal examples and how the words flowed so well in your essay. Thank you for sharing! -- Mrs. Geib